Wednesday, January 26, 2011
Description of my assigned picture
The sun set behind the clouds, giving out a fresh marigold bloom as of an arrogant sunflower, colouring the the clouds gold as well. The last rays of the evening sun shone on the water's surface, much to the delight of fishermen and tourists on boats. As the day came to an end, all the boats were heading back home, with boutiful catch, as everybody on the boats exclaimed,"What a spectacular sight!"
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The description is generally good and accurate and there was a very good use of similes and metaphors. but there is one thing I want to contradict. If the people on the boats were fishermen, then they would have been seeing this scene for many years by now. Why would they exclaim "What a spectacular sight"? That's all I'm going to comment. :)
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